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<P> </P><P> <FONT color=#0000ff size=5> 中秋佳节快到了,我出一上联,与楹联爱好者共同欢乐,讨论... ... 谢谢大家 !</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5> 上联是:</FONT></P><P> <FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=7> 一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</FONT></P><P> </P><P> <FONT color=#0000ff size=5> 2007.10.5.公布答案 </FONT></P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5></FONT> </P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5></FONT> </P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5></FONT> </P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5> </FONT></P><BR><BR><BR><BR>[此帖子已被 偶然 在 2007-9-19 17:01:22 编辑过]<BR><BR>[此帖子已被 偶然 在 2007-10-5 10:58:06 编辑过]<br><br>[此帖子已被 偶然 在 2007-10-9 11:59:21 编辑过] 这个还真不好对,大家努力. 共同努力 原文由 紫衣の罗兰 发表: <br><P>原文由 偶然 发表: <BR>请罗兰朋友抽时间对一下此楹联,谢谢您 ! </P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=7>一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</FONT></P><P> </P><P><FONT face=隶书 color=#9709f7 size=7>一盏灯,两盘小菜,三口之家,酌一杯清酒邀月。</FONT></P><P> </P><P></P><P> <FONT color=#0000ff> 罗兰朋友您好 ! 看到您风趣的下联很高兴。但,按联律规则要求,上联出现字,下联就不能再使用,</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#0000ff>除虚词“之乎者也”等以外... ... 。对联讲究“正对为庸,反对为佳”。此意见仅供参考。祝您愉快 !</FONT></P> 原文由 畅游大海 发表: <br><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=6>我来个顺口溜请大家不要见笑哦:</FONT></P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=6>一家人,两种性别,三口之家,来一起赏月</FONT></P><P></P><P> <FONT color=#0000ff>开心一乐的对联,很有趣。感谢您的参与 !</FONT></P> <br> 请罗兰朋友抽时间对一下此楹联,谢谢您 ! <P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=7>一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</FONT></P><P> </P><P><FONT face=隶书 color=#9709f7 size=7>一盏灯,两盘小菜,三口之家,酌一杯清酒邀月。</FONT></P><br><br>[此帖子已被 紫衣の罗兰 在 2007-9-21 17:00:18 编辑过] <P>原文由 偶然 发表: <BR>请罗兰朋友抽时间对一下此楹联,谢谢您 ! </P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=7>一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</FONT></P><P> </P><P><FONT face=隶书 color=#9709f7 size=7>一盏灯,两盘小菜,三口之家,酌一杯清酒邀月。</FONT></P><P> </P> <P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=6>我来个顺口溜请大家不要见笑哦:</FONT></P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=6>一家人,两种性别,三口之家,来一起赏月</FONT></P> 原文由 偶然 发表: <br><P> </P><P> <FONT color=#0000ff size=5> 中秋佳节快到了,我出一上联,与楹联爱好者共同欢乐,讨论... ... 谢谢大家 !</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5> 上联是:</FONT></P><P> <FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=7> 一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</FONT></P><P> </P><P> <FONT color=#0000ff size=5> 2007.10.5.公布答案 </FONT></P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5>敬请威海专区的楹联爱好者参与进来。谢谢大家 !</FONT></P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5></FONT> </P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5></FONT> </P><P><FONT color=#0000ff size=5> </FONT></P><BR><BR><BR><BR>[此帖子已被 偶然 在 2007-9-19 17:01:22 编辑过] <P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><FONT face=隶书 color=#52cc33>试对下联三副请方家正笔:</FONT></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><FONT face=宋体>上联是</FONT></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma">:</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma"> </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #ff0033; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: 隶书; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书"> </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #ff0033; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"></SPAN><FONT color=#2b2bd5><FONT size=5><FONT face=宋体>下联</SPAN></FONT><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma">:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(一)</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">千只手,百尊观音,八仙品茶,数万颗星斗。</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(二)</SPAN></SPAN></P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">百铭阁,千首诗词,群贤展才,观九州泳将。</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(三)</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">百条河,千位泳士,万众陪游,练一身铁骨。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN> </P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p><FONT size=3> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P> </P><br><br>[此帖子已被 浪里金身 在 2007-9-24 23:18:39 编辑过] 原文由 浪里金身 发表: <br><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><FONT face=隶书 color=#52cc33>试对下联三副请方家正笔:</FONT></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><FONT face=宋体>上联是</FONT></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma">:</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma"> </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #ff0033; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: 隶书; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书"> </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #ff0033; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"></SPAN><FONT color=#2b2bd5><FONT size=5><FONT face=宋体>下联</SPAN></FONT><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma">:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(一)</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">千只手,百尊观音,八仙品茶,数万颗星斗。</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(二)</SPAN></SPAN></P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">百铭阁,千首诗词,群贤展才,观九州泳将。</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(三)</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">百条河,千位泳士,万众陪游,练一身铁骨。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN><FONT color=#0000ff size=4> 您好!欣赏!看来是下了工夫。我们先讨论(一),按平仄相对原则:一,三,五... ...不论;二,四,六... ...分明,</FONT></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><FONT color=#0000ff size=4>您的“只,百,观,八,品,数,颗 —— 不符合联律要求。这幅联把我们带入了仙境,好漂亮的意境。再讨论(二),也有平仄问题“铭,诗,群,展,州”。“千首诗词”对“两行楹联”对句盖出句,好!</FONT></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><FONT color=#0000ff size=4>(三)也有类似问题“条,练,身”。眼界高,气势大,歌颂游泳健儿 !</FONT></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><FONT color=#0000ff size=4>我们共同学习 !以上意见仅供参考 。祝中秋节健康愉快 !</FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p><FONT color=#0000ff size=4> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P> </P><BR> 原文由 浪里金身 发表: <BR><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><FONT face=隶书 color=#52cc33>试对下联三副请方家正笔:</FONT></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><FONT face=宋体>上联是</FONT></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma">:</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma"> </SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #ff0033; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: 隶书; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书"> </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #ff0033; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"></SPAN><FONT color=#2b2bd5><FONT size=5><FONT face=宋体>下联</SPAN></FONT><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma">:<o:p></o:p></SPAN></FONT></FONT></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(一)</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">千只手,百尊观音,八仙品茶,数万颗星斗。</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(二)</SPAN></SPAN></P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma"><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">百铭阁,千首诗词,群贤展才,观九州泳将。</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">(三)</SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma">百条河,千位泳士,万众陪游,练一身铁骨。<SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN></P><P style="WORD-BREAK: break-all"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p></o:p></SPAN></SPAN> </P><P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US><o:p><FONT size=3> </FONT></o:p></SPAN></P><P> </P><P><BR><BR>[此帖子已被 浪里金身 在 2007-9-24 23:18:39 编辑过] </P><P> </P><P> <FONT color=#3300ff size=5>“浪里金身”欢迎继续讨论。我的下联2007.10.5. 准时公布,届时请您评头品足,多提意见 !</FONT></P><br><br>[此帖子已被 偶然 在 2007-9-27 15:45:37 编辑过] <P> </P><P> </P><P><FONT color=#3300ff size=4>欢迎《中国冬泳》网的朋友们,继续应对。我们互相学习,共同讨论 !</FONT></P> <P><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体"><FONT size=5><SPAN style="COLOR: #ff0000">公布答案:</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P><P><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体"><FONT size=5><SPAN style="COLOR: #ff0000">上联:一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月<BR><BR>下联:万顷波,千里韵律,四季搏涛,添万丈豪情<FONT size=4>(参考答案)</FONT><BR><BR>横幅:鸭水金秋</SPAN></FONT></SPAN><BR><BR>说明:对联一般没有标准答案,因为天外有天,人上有人... ...<BR><BR> 请网友们多提意见,评头品足 !</P> <P> </P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#3809f7 size=4>原上联:</FONT></P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=6>一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</FONT></P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#0000ff size=4>对下联:</FONT></P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=6>万卷书,千首律赋,四史求真,观万里红尘</FONT></P><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=6> <FONT color=#0000ff size=4>(补充参考答案) 敬请网友评头品足 !</FONT></FONT></P> 顶 原文由 紫衣の罗兰 发表: <br><P><FONT face=黑体 color=#ff0033 size=7>一枝笔,两行楹联,三人对酒,赏一轮明月</FONT></P><P> </P><P><FONT face=隶书 color=#9709f7 size=7>一盏灯,两盘小菜,三口之家,酌一杯清酒邀月。</FONT></P><BR><BR>[此帖子已被 紫衣の罗兰 在 2007-9-21 17:00:18 编辑过]
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